great effort, but not as good as the first
there are much fewer typos (if any at all) and a lot less grammatical errors. the fight scenes werent as actiony as the first one, as they were somtimes slow and mostly just magic tricks. i hope for the 3rd one that its really actiony and not as slow or talky, but at least in this one the dialogue isnt...well...stupid.
GREAT effort. xan tells me you worked REALLY hard on this. this one deserves an award ):