Rammer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doom's Target Practice]

excellent (:

great job. the graphics were clean and stylish, the sounds wre crisp, and it was quite funny.

excellent job. i fourfened it.

[Hey Newgrounds]

groovy.

my old, underscore-infested name is in the credits. i feel so...thanked :P

anyway, this movie was brilliant. simple and funny. minimalistic ROXXORS, LOL.

got ne pron 4 me?

SeizureDog responds:

Arigatou gozaimazu.

[Madness Elimination 2]

eh, it wasn't bad.

let me first say that to avoid pissing you off, i will give you a decent critique.

first off, i was waiting at the loading screen for something to happen. after about a minute, i saw the play button. i'm not sure why it's so unnoticeable, but i think it has something to do with the composition. put it somewhere in the middle when it is fully loaded.

second, the animation was quite choppy. the walk cycles were sloppy at best, and during the fight scenes, the protagonist only seemed to get one person at a time while all the others just kind of hobbled around. i'm sure it can look actiony to some, but to me, it just looks really stupid. also, some of the people seemed to just get slammed down when the main guy would shoot or hit them, rather than just flopping down like a silly ragdoll.

the music was horrible. i hated it, i hated it, i hated it. 'nuff said.

i DO understand that these flashes take a while to make. i have been making flash since i was 12 (and even then, most of my flash works passed judgement with a decent score). i'm sure there's some retard out there blamming this because he knows your age and just ASSUMES it will be bad. screw them. ageism is for twats.

above all, this wasn't bad. just take your time even moreso than you probably did. make those walk cycles smoother, and make sure the protagonist is not just going after one guy at a time while all the others are just kind of walking around him.

Splurgle responds:

You know I'm just getting bad reviews because of the front page you know, people are steaming with jealousy.

[Pick Up]

excellent job.

hey skaijo, remember me? i used to go in the flash forum a lot and i helped critique a beta of your movie (i think).

excellent job on the movie, but i think it would have been better off without voices or other sounds. the music could have set the atmosphere and you could still just have subtitles instead of voices \:

but other than that, i really liked the finished product. not really much more to say \:

Skaijo responds:

Don't be stupid. :P

Of course I remember you. You're not only one of my Flash buddies, but I also look up to you as an artist and programmer. It's totally cool to get a review from you, mizan.

I'll post a Music Video Edit (that will just have the animation and music) on my deviant art page sometime this week just for you.

[Stop Crying - Part 4]

you're improving...

the art in this is a bit better than your last ones, as is the animation. however, a certain problem has been pervasive in this series: voice acting. none of the voice actors have any emotion, and they talk stiffly, without any 'rhythm' like we normally do. if it wasn't for the shoddy voice acting, the lip sync (or lack thereof), and small amount of animation, this would be a great flash.

however, i DO realize this wasn't made to be an artistic wonder, but if you put more effort into this, people would be able to sympathize with you better because they can get into the story without being distracted by the voice acting and bad lip sync.

[The Composer]

amazing

the story was great (if not slightly clichéd), as well as the drawings and music.

however, my two problems with this are pervasive throughout this noir: the sound and music quality, and the animation quality. if the animation was smoother, and sounds clearer, it'd be perfect and well worth the increased file size.